 gothian
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Date: August 9, 2004 @ 3:23 PM
You have to work a lot in your soloing, you play a very dirty solo and it is not at the right tempo. The riff has some mistakes also. You have to play with more feeling, I could sence some stress there, loose up man!. I hope you embrace open-minded my critic. Keep practicing and send more music pal. 
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 Ironman69
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Date: August 30, 2004 @ 9:19 PM
Yeah. I agree with gothian. Speed up the solo tempo a bit and it'll sound great.
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rookie0ne
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Date: October 15, 2005 @ 12:40 PM
You screwed everything up, including the song name. You do need A LOT of practice.
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Vermintide
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Date: January 11, 2007 @ 1:33 PM
Why does it start so promisingly and then fall down? It could be great. Keep working mate. Work on a better guitar tone too, this is very muddy, with little definition.
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